Magequarters, late afternoon, the well lies behind elyuna ( or Ely for closest friends) the sun seems to lose his greatest power as he is slightly gowing down behind the trees and that very moment seems for ely as if time stands still. she can only watch at the for her so familiar woman in front of her, holding her breath, not able to speak only to look what she does, forgetting everything that happens around her. She peers at with anxiety and yet alo scary eyes at the only worthy treasure she has in her life, wich now is firm hold in the hand of her friend. Seeing the locker, or medaillon her thoughts go back in time to the moment she retrieved it from that old druid in darnassus who told her that she wore this on her body as baby when she was brought to the cenarion enclave after people has found her where she was left behind. Would the locker finally reveale it's secret? Her friend has been able to read the inscription on the front and was trying to open it. Ely heard some clicking sounds and her attention was pulled to the locker again, the two caldorei gazed to eachother not able to say a word, the locker was carefully opened.

You need some space between the lines at some places, and it's Kaldorei, not Caldorei.

Otherwise its good. A little short, but good.